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W.I.P Sprites (Update Shikamaru Nara.3) (NTSD stuffs)

RetroMafioso

Date: Saturday, 2011-10-22, 6:06 PM | Message # 1

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So, I'll upload the sprites that fit more in style with the ntsd sprites. (I hope :V)

NEW STUFF:

Hinaya Hyuuga: (Updated.3)

Trafalgar Law: (Updated.0) -In need of comments

Shikamaru Nara: (Updated.3) -In need of doing more work

Please provide me with guides.pointers on how to improve the sprite to fit the stlye more appropriately. As well as overall shading, anatomy, etc. Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks! ^0^

These will most likely be the works I use to apply into the [NTSD] team- after revisions of course.

(Eventually, I will post a gallery. However, I wanted to get my application done first- then I'll work on some stuff to use for a gallery)

Message edited by RetroMafioso - Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:32 AM

MugenMaster

Date: Saturday, 2011-10-22, 7:01 PM | Message # 2

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These look like very promising characters~

For hinata, the only problems I can see are her right arm, it's bent sort of like rubber. And her hair's shading seems a bit too spread-out, the lightest shade is covering most of it. Otherwise it checks out in my book~

For Trafalgar, his pose is a little bent, when I'm guessing he should be standing straight up. The only other big problem with it are the ruffles in the pants, they look very, very odd and I would recommend making them a little less noticeable, while still being part of the sprite.

There really isn't anything wrong with Shikamaru as far as I can see, for now at least.

Good work, Mafioso~

Ace

Date: Saturday, 2011-10-22, 10:18 PM | Message # 3

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Very good if you ask me. Hinata looks really good. Only thing about Law is that his shoulder looks very weird to me, other than that it looks all good.

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The only other big problem with it are the ruffles in the pants, they look very, very odd and I would recommend making them a little less noticeable, while still being part of the sprite.

Those are the jaguar spot patterns he has on his pants, at the knees and at the bottom.
As for Shikamaru, it looks great, but theres one tiny bit at his elbow/forearm that bugs me. It's not really a big deal though.

Overall, very well done.

RetroMafioso

Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 5:20 PM | Message # 4

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Tanks guys! I will be working on Hinata's arm, and I have already fixed the positioning of her feet to fit the style more. (Thanks to Lunar) I'll probably update it later on in the day. But as far as Law and Shikamaru go, I probably won't be updating them anytime soon. I want to use team 'Kurenai' sprites for my application into the game. So I just need a Kiba sprite (I'll upload Shino, after finished editing Hinata and making Kiba)

As far as Law goes; yeah, I will have to edit that shoulder to fix the overall awkward positioning of him looking bent. I didn't get the hoped for outcome of having a straight look like you see. [in the pics]

And finally Shikamaru I have noticed the shadsing isn't very good on the vest and that arm (the one that is entirely shown) looks awkward. Pallete choosing for the vest is hard. :/ Nonetheless- thanks guy! happy

papertobi

Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:15 AM | Message # 5

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Hehe i like your way of spriting :3 mostly your stances, really creative,
-Hinata: I like it i give it a 7/10, i think the legs and arms are kinda big but that can be fixed i think, in the face make the bangs more detailed maybe, so she looks more like hinata, the colors might be a little bit dark but overall is rly good :3
-Shikamaru: I dont really see anything wrong, i like the way you did him :3 9/10 i give it, maybe the colors should be a bit softer but idk, and there is somehting in his right sleeve that makes me think, maybe edit it a little, i dont know, hehe thats my opinion, btu overall i like your sprites, keep practicing and you will get and be really good :3

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ogy95

Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:17 AM | Message # 6

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your creations are very good... biggrin

RetroMafioso

Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:19 AM | Message # 7

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Woah thank you very much- I actually updated Hinata by the way. (woops forgot to update it here...but it's on da)
Nooooo I don't edit. I spend a lot of times completely, customly making my sprites!
^-^
Thank you very much for the comments! ^-^ I hope I can advance my skills and become better and better and better! xD

(Crap after I do Kiba, I'm going to work on some sheetings...I must say I'm a bit nervous -_-)

Thanks very muchy Ogy! ^0^

Message edited by RetroMafioso - Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:19 AM

papertobi

Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:21 AM | Message # 8

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Nooooo I don't edit. I spend a lot of times completely, customly making my sprites!

oh ok, well i guess i edit sprites just the ones that i use for official stuff but if its practice is ok :3

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Thank you very much for the comments! ^-^ I hope I can advance my skills and become better and better and better! xD

(Crap after I do Kiba, I'm going to work on some sheetings...I must say I'm a bit nervous -_-)

hehe you will, and well do little stuff like a run or attacks little stuff for practice and you will improve more and more everytime heh :3

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ogy95

Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:22 AM | Message # 9

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you working on kiba!!! cooool,i cannot wait to see the kiba creation... biggrin

RetroMafioso

Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:23 AM | Message # 10

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Well, I mean for bases I don't edit.
I haven't sheeted much- just a run (and it was completely custom just referenced off of a different sprite (and style))

I can only hope! xD

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i cannot wait to see the kiba creation

Yes sir. I have also already made Shino and fixed up Hinata a bit. I am going to sheet some combos for them to apply to join a team.

Message edited by RetroMafioso - Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:24 AM

ogy95

Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:27 AM | Message # 11

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you already finish shino? when are you going to post it,i would like to see him... biggrin

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papertobi

Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:30 AM | Message # 12

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I haven't sheeted much- just a run (and it was completely custom just referenced off of a different sprite (and style))

oh yeah thats kinda what i do :3 haha

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RetroMafioso

Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:34 AM | Message # 13

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Alright I am working on a paper due tomorrow right now and I have been procrastinating the entire day, so I can't upload the sprites in my usual manner (maybe when I finish I'll get to it)
However

Update~
.Added Shino Aburame
.Updated Hinata Hyuuga.4

HakuHuchiha

Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 9:26 AM | Message # 14