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W.I.P Sprites (Update Shikamaru Nara.3)
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| jiraiya96 | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 7:02 PM | Message # 16 |
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| Personally I like Hinata most, but her right arm like Mugenmaster said is ben like rubber, and her left one is I think a bit too long. Shino leans a bit backwards, and has a bit short legs. And as you wont update the rest I wont give any advice :P Overally You did a hell of a job  9.10
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 7:20 PM | Message # 17 |
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| Quote (RetroMafioso)
Reall? I don't know- maybe!
It's probably just the style, I decided a long time ago SND5 is a horrible style, and this resembles to it 
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 7:20 PM | Message # 18 |
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| xD All in due time, they will be updated. But I want to get one thing at a time- so I don't get too distracted with too many projects. I really appreciate the criticism. Shio was a pain to make that black robe type jacket on top of his black pants, so yea I don't know I'll look into fixing it.
(By the way, do you know hwo to add an avi? Not saying you need one, I just could help you if you did not know how)
*ninja'd -_-
Quote (HakuHuchiha) this resembles to it
Then I'm happy xP I'm going for ntsd which is snd.
Message edited by RetroMafioso - Monday, 2011-10-24, 7:21 PM |
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 7:22 PM | Message # 19 |
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| Quote (RetroMafioso) Then I'm happy xP I'm going for ntsd which is snd.
Yeah, I figured
I could give some CnC, but I guess most parts are covered already
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 7:27 PM | Message # 20 |
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| Yeah, I have a prett good idea of what needs fixing! ;D(wait...what?... that face doesn't seem right o.O) xD (there we go)
Message edited by RetroMafioso - Monday, 2011-10-24, 7:28 PM |
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Tuesday, 2011-10-25, 4:22 AM | Message # 21 |
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| Finished the application to be a base spriter:
Gotta work on the sheeting tonight
(*NOTE: I amy be working on a tutorial for this style soon- keep an eye out for the third tutorial in RSTH!)
Message edited by RetroMafioso - Tuesday, 2011-10-25, 4:24 AM |
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| benhazard | Date: Saturday, 2011-10-29, 11:13 PM | Message # 22 |
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| well, I might give you some suggestions, but wanted to ask if I can edit and correct to show you the easiest way. ^^
Ryuujin revenge Wip
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-30, 0:52 AM | Message # 23 |
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| Sure if you'd like.
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| benhazard | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-30, 3:37 AM | Message # 24 |
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| here, example of hinata updated, next will be kiba.^^
Ryuujin revenge Wip
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| MugenMaster | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-30, 4:38 AM | Message # 25 |
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| Quote (benhazard) here, example of hinata updated, next will be kiba.^^
It looks like you just extended the hair a bit...lol
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-30, 4:47 AM | Message # 26 |
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| 'That. and made the body skinnier. I like what you did there, but personally I prefer my [hinata's] hair.
Also, if I make her torso skinnier I believe her legs should then be smaller which was a lare problem everyone kept bringing to my attention.
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| Ace | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-30, 4:48 AM | Message # 27 |
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| Quote (MugenMaster) It looks like you just extended the hair a bit...lol
Yeah... only other difference I see is that either her waist is thinner or the bottom of her shirt is slightly wider, not sure which.
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| Garp | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-30, 4:51 AM | Message # 28 |
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It looks like you just extended the hair a bit...lol
you re missing the most important part - the left leg (right side from our perspective). proportion looks way better now.
You can throw food on me, you can pour drinks on me, you can even spit on me, i'll just laugh that stuff off. But good reason or not, nobody hurts a friend of mine!! ~ Shanks
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-30, 5:21 AM | Message # 29 |
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| Ahh I see it- it does; the less gap! Hmmm, I need to do soem more practice.
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| MugenMaster | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-30, 5:26 AM | Message # 30 |
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| Quote (Garp) you re missing the most important part - the left leg (right side from our perspective). proportion looks way better now.
Ah, now I see. Her arm still looks like rubber though...lol
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