SimTheDog | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-30, 6:01 AM | Message # 31 |
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| Hinata looks like she has a hunch-back, her stance doesn't even look stable due to the fact that her left leg is positioned wrong, mixing the black outlining with the much brighter shading is not a good method at all, and the face detail isn't there. Also add some shine to her hair. So yeah, although it isn't horrible, you've still got a few important things to sort out.
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