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Flame's WIP stuff
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| Dancing-Flames | Date: Tuesday, 2011-10-25, 9:45 PM | Message # 1 |
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| Stages -
Sprites -
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 1:17 AM | Message # 2 |
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| I could never sprite stages- But I'm starting to think about giving them a go. From what you've shown, these are very good! ^0^ I'm aware of how hard it is sometimes.
I look forward to seeing some of your sprites, when you upload some.
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| Z3R0 | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 12:59 PM | Message # 3 |
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| Add some texture to wood.
"People don't know art." ~ Raven
"Truth begins in lies. Everybody lies." ~ House
"We all wish we can jizz 12 feet but not even Venom can do that." ~ Sylph
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| Viz | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 6:51 PM | Message # 4 |
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| Quote (Z3R0) Add some texture to wood.
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| SimTheDog | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 7:04 PM | Message # 5 |
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| The wood looks like a pile of bricks. Change the tone of the colors to a more paler brown.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| Deshar | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 7:33 PM | Message # 6 |
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| My reactions while reading the comments. "Wait that's wood? Wait that's wood? Oh yeah it is!" Summed up, I thought they were made of brick, but there's definatly patchwork in there isn't there?
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| Dancing-Flames | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 7:35 PM | Message # 7 |
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| Quote (Deshar) My reactions while reading the comments. "Wait that's wood? Wait that's wood? Oh yeah it is!" Summed up, I thought they were made of brick, but there's definatly patchwork in there isn't there?
...I think there is, lol, idk.
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| Sword | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 9:18 PM | Message # 8 |
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| Quote (Deshar) My reactions while reading the comments. "Wait that's wood? Wait that's wood? Oh yeah it is!" Summed up,
That made me laugh
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| Dancing-Flames | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 9:35 PM | Message # 9 |
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| Added Drake Kurayami, my OC.
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 9:43 PM | Message # 10 |
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| Is it just me, or does Drake lack shading?
Or did you try JUS, but didn't how to shade?
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| Dancing-Flames | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 9:45 PM | Message # 11 |
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| Quote (HakuHuchiha) Is it just me, or does Drake lack shading?
Or did you try JUS, but didn't how to shade?
The title says WIP.
And if you mean the skin, I added it exactly like it was in JUS.
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 9:51 PM | Message # 12 |
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| Quote (Dancing-Flames) The title says WIP.
Whoops, forgot about that 
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| Dancing-Flames | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 9:53 PM | Message # 13 |
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| Quote (HakuHuchiha) Whoops, forgot about that tongue
Lol, kay xD
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 9:57 PM | Message # 14 |
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| Well, the thing is, even though it's a WIP, you can't really say much about it
The few things I can say are these
His pose seems a little bit odd. I'm guessing you did it on purpose, but it doesn't look very comfortable to lean back like that
And the outline of his left side, our right side, of his chest seems a bit too blocky to me 
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| Dancing-Flames | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 10:29 PM | Message # 15 |
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| Any tips on the shading? I seem to mess it up every time  Added (10.26.2011, 10:29 PM)
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Updated Drake Kurayami.
My DA: Saruman-II
Message edited by Dancing-Flames - Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 10:14 PM |
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