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| RetroMafioso | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 7:56 AM | Message # 1 |
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| So yeah, I'm definitely goigng to redo this. But what can you say that i should change as of now? Maybe I could do a similar pose. But I had a new idea of a pose, if this isn't/won't work.
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| Ace | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 8:00 AM | Message # 2 |
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| Eh I don't much care for the pose to be honest. And the shading on his shirt could definitely use some work. You have the contrast down nicely though. Also, isn't his shirt partially open at the front? You can't really see that in this.
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 8:03 AM | Message # 3 |
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| Alright, I don't really care for it either. I'm goign for a more idle pose now.
Yes, it doesn't show here- it seems that the collar distracted me into positioning that part facing right, and his body 3/4.
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| Souleaterf | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 8:05 AM | Message # 4 |
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| He looks like a rat more than a hawk imo lol
I like the lower half and the back part of the hair, the rest of it need major work including the stance. Maybe use a stance from a naruto video game?
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 8:13 AM | Message # 5 |
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| Hmm, like snd? I was thinking of going for a more subtle leaning against the sword stance.
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| Souleaterf | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 8:17 AM | Message # 6 |
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| Quote (RetroMafioso) Hmm, like snd? I was thinking of going for a more subtle leaning against the sword stance.
Taka still has a sword? But I was thinking like Ninja Storm or anything that has taka sasuke
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 8:18 AM | Message # 7 |
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| Oh, right...Heheh I forgot.
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| Souleaterf | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 8:21 AM | Message # 8 |
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| Quote (RetroMafioso) Oh, right...Heheh I forgot.
Details children details! DX
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| snoop755 | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 8:59 AM | Message # 9 |
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| He still had his sword just not his curse mark
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 9:02 AM | Message # 10 |
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Hows this?
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| snoop755 | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 9:11 AM | Message # 11 |
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| the skirt needs to be shorter and shaded better
also the arm is way to long
But I really like the shading on the shirt
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 9:23 AM | Message # 12 |
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Any better?
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| snoop755 | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 9:47 AM | Message # 13 |
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| still looks long :/
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| Souleaterf | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 3:50 PM | Message # 14 |
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| Make the arm shorter by like 3 pixel more senior. The pose is pretty cool though imo it really emphasizes his blindness but also his hands seem odd imo
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 4:33 PM | Message # 15 |
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| I think the hair is too thick, I'll look to fix it.
Also, I'll fix the hand and arm stuff. And finally the skirt is actually long on him in the ref pictures.
I'll re-edit this stuff tonight when I get home.
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