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JUS Hawk Sasuke
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| SimTheDog | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 4:35 PM | Message # 16 |
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| The reason why the pose looks awkward is because the legs are too short. I'd feel comfortable giving more criticism if you do so.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 4:45 PM | Message # 17 |
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| I would appreciate it.
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| Souleaterf | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-18, 8:20 AM | Message # 18 |
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| Overall the main problem I have with the stance is the angle, JUS has less looking straight ahead and more of diagonal look.
Here's a little work done on Sasuke if you want to keep him at the current angle
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-18, 8:39 AM | Message # 19 |
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| Hmm, that's helpful. I liekj what you did with the head. I'll reedit mine according to this. But, aren't the legs too close?
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| Souleaterf | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-18, 5:11 PM | Message # 20 |
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| I just put the legs the same place you did but yeah they did seem kinda close, but I didn't wanna edit the skirt a ton......But you should :P
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-21, 11:22 PM | Message # 21 |
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I tried a bit of a different approach. Not sure how to get the shading more JUSy. I'll keep going at it.
*Used several parts of soul's
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| snoop755 | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-21, 11:29 PM | Message # 22 |
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| looks alot better but it just seems like the lower half is front view and top is side
maybe make his legs a little closer
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-21, 11:31 PM | Message # 23 |
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| Right. I'll look into it.
Thanks snoop ^o^
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| SimTheDog | Date: Monday, 2012-01-23, 3:40 PM | Message # 24 |
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| Which direction is the light source coming from? Also, this one is good:
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Monday, 2012-01-23, 11:42 PM | Message # 25 |
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| Okay, thansk Sim.
Well, yea it's supposed to be upper left to lower right. Or well, whatever JUS is. I know I am having issues with my shading, because I think a lot into it, and it comes out wrong. I still need to grasp that ideal among other things.
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