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JUS Sage Naruto
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| Ace | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 11:02 AM | Message # 1 |
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| This is a relatively simple edit. A guy on dA named ShenDytan is working on an Ichigo vs Naruto animation, and he wanted to have a Sage Naruto to use in it. So, me and Soul decided to make one ourselves. This is the base sprite, probably going to be changed a bit as I'm not completely satisfied with the shading.
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| LiveitBig | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 11:06 AM | Message # 2 |
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| Make the eyes darker or something. It is very hard to spot them out
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 3:07 PM | Message # 3 |
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| Once again, the contrast's a big problem
Other than that, the shading on his cloak is dull, and some outlines could use some twitching I guess 
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| SimTheDog | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 6:24 PM | Message # 4 |
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| The red cloak and the face needs more contrast. Also remove the white shading from the hair and make Naruto's left fore-arm shorter. Other than that, it's good.
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| Souleaterf | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 7:10 PM | Message # 5 |
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| My biggest problems are the eyes and the contrast on the cloak Seems like you wanted to make the eyes closed? I say no way sir to that! Also we need the scroll on his back!
Message edited by Souleaterf - Sunday, 2012-01-15, 7:11 PM |
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| snoop755 | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 10:10 PM | Message # 6 |
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| nice, I agree with everyone on this
but after fixing those things this should be great
also I seen ShenDytan Wip animation and it was pretty good
Is that the guy that your going to see if he can come here??
(sorry if that doesn't sound right :/ couldn't find a good way to say it lol)
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| Ace | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 11:31 PM | Message # 7 |
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| Quote (HakuHuchiha) Once again, the contrast's a big problem
Other than that, the shading on his cloak is dull, and some outlines could use some twitching I guess
I was kinda thinking the contrast was off a bit... wasn't completely sure though XD
And yeah, I really don't like the shading of the cloak. I'll try to redo that.
Quote (SimTheDog) The red cloak and the face needs more contrast. Also remove the white shading from the hair and make Naruto's left fore-arm shorter. Other than that, it's good.
The red cloak, you're definitely right. But the rest of that was from the Naruto JUS sheet...
Quote (Souleaterf) My biggest problems are the eyes and the contrast on the cloak Seems like you wanted to make the eyes closed? I say no way sir to that! Also we need the scroll on his back!
Well, I'm not really sure what you want me to do about the eyes. He's got a yellow pupil, but with the color of his face and hair it's practically invisible.
And crap, I completely forgot about the scroll >.<Quote (snoop755) Is that the guy that your going to see if he can come here??
Yep, I was thinking after we get this sheet for him we could see if he'd help us out.
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| Souleaterf | Date: Monday, 2012-01-16, 2:37 AM | Message # 8 |
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| Quote (Ace) Well, I'm not really sure what you want me to do about the eyes. He's got a yellow pupil, but with the color of his face and hair it's practically invisible.
And crap, I completely forgot about the scroll >.<
I knew it!
Also what's with that skin pallet?
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| Ace | Date: Monday, 2012-01-16, 10:27 PM | Message # 9 |
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| Quote (Souleaterf) Also what's with that skin pallet?
I dunno! I just left Naruto as he was on the sheet, except what I needed to edit for the pose and such
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| SimTheDog | Date: Monday, 2012-01-16, 11:26 PM | Message # 10 |
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| I'm gonna edit this spite too.
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| Souleaterf | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 6:10 AM | Message # 11 |
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| Ace how's this? 
Message edited by Souleaterf - Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 7:05 AM |
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| snoop755 | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 6:56 AM | Message # 12 |
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| nice job
i didn't even notice the sleeve earlier
but good job can't wait to see the sheet
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| Souleaterf | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 7:07 AM | Message # 13 |
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| Quote (snoop755) nice job
i didn't even notice the sleeve earlier
but good job can't wait to see the sheet
Thanks neither did I until I looked at a reference picture to see how he wears that scroll then I was like "Oh shit!" Hopefully Ace and I can get a little more crit on it and then we can start the sheeting process.
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| Ace | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 7:20 AM | Message # 14 |
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| Quote (snoop755) nice job
i didn't even notice the sleeve earlier
but good job can't wait to see the sheet
Quote (Souleaterf) Thanks neither did I until I looked at a reference picture to see how he wears that scroll then I was like "Oh shit!" Hopefully Ace and I can get a little more crit on it and then we can start the sheeting process.
Ah jeez I gotta pay more attention to my refs.. that's 2 things I missed! DX
Quote (Souleaterf) Ace how's this?
Looks great man, you did an awesome job fixing it lol
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 7:23 AM | Message # 15 |
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| If the updated one is the one all the way to the right, I have only one comment. His pants seem a bit too bulgy.
Other than that, great job!
If you guys weren't planing on doing them, mind if I sprite the frogs?
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