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Susanoo wip by me ^^
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| Fantom13 | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 6:46 PM | Message # 1 |
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| Ace | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 9:48 PM | Message # 2 |
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| Looks pretty good to me so far. I'm looking forward to seeing how it looks finished.
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| Dancing-Flames | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 9:55 PM | Message # 3 |
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| Wow, that's awesome ^^
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 10:00 PM | Message # 4 |
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| I do see some pillow shading, on his spine, but that's probably because of the size of the sprite
It ain't bad, tough it's maybe a little bit too small, if you're gonna put a sprite under that susanoo 
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| MugenMaster | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 10:42 PM | Message # 5 |
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| Aside from the collar bones and the spine(which are all pillow-shaded) it seems alright. Actually if you found some way to animate this I think it could be pretty decent~
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| Madara | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 11:56 PM | Message # 6 |
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| i like it
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-27, 1:25 AM | Message # 7 |
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| The facial details could use more work. Some outlining is a little messy; doubling too much- for one example the horn's outline leading to the jawbone. Also to show where the bones are comig to a curve you could show more of the middle/darker colors of the pallete towards the endings of the bones (ie the rib cage, neck bones, etc) Also depending on the style-like Haku mentioned the size might need some reworking.
Other than these things- ver impressive work- I'm looking forward to seeing the finished product! ^-^
Please keep up the good work and keep posting more sprites as well as commenting on others'.
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| Fantom13 | Date: Friday, 2011-10-28, 6:50 PM | Message # 8 |
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| SharinganAce, Dancing-Flames, HakuHuchiha, MugenMaster, Madara, RetroMafioso, thanks ^^
and this is new version ...
All defects have been fixed)...probably)
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| Viz | Date: Friday, 2011-10-28, 7:32 PM | Message # 9 |
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| Needs to be shaded.
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| Dancing-Flames | Date: Friday, 2011-10-28, 7:44 PM | Message # 10 |
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| And what have u done to his neck? I liked the first one better.
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| Garp | Date: Friday, 2011-10-28, 7:50 PM | Message # 11 |
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| Quote (Dancing-Flames) And what have u done to his neck? I liked the first one better.
also wondered bout that. looks weird now.
You can throw food on me, you can pour drinks on me, you can even spit on me, i'll just laugh that stuff off. But good reason or not, nobody hurts a friend of mine!! ~ Shanks
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| Sword | Date: Friday, 2011-10-28, 10:39 PM | Message # 12 |
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| Looks like some kind of neck beard.
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| Viz | Date: Friday, 2011-10-28, 10:41 PM | Message # 13 |
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| To be honest, the first version was better.
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| Dancing-Flames | Date: Friday, 2011-10-28, 10:44 PM | Message # 14 |
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| Quote (Viz) To be honest, the first version was better.
This.
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| Sword | Date: Friday, 2011-10-28, 10:59 PM | Message # 15 |
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| Quote (Dancing-Flames) Quote (Viz)
To be honest, the first version was better.
This.
Yeah me too. In the first one he looks angrier and is more detailed, like his horns for example.
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