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| reborn574 | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 6:05 AM | Message # 1 |
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| So im currently working on Captain Falcon
*ill sheet him soon*
Any cc to make him better?
(All stuff here will eventually be put in my gallery)
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| Ace | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 6:45 AM | Message # 2 |
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| It's pretty good. I think you might be trying to fit in too much detail, though. It's getting to the point where parts of it just look messy. Maybe if you were to clean that up and focus on the details a little bit less, it would look better. Oh, and his shoulder pad had a weird little group of pixels on the outline
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| reborn574 | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 7:07 AM | Message # 3 |
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| Quote It's pretty good. I think you might be trying to fit in too much detail, though. It's getting to the point where parts of it just look messy. Maybe if you were to clean that up and focus on the details a little bit less, it would look better. Oh, and his shoulder pad had a weird little group of pixels on the outline
Ahh,yeah i forgot about that.And will do.Added (10.23.2011, 7:07 Am)
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Update*cleaned it up a little and changed the colors.
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| Ace | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 7:52 AM | Message # 4 |
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| Looks better now. Also it might just be me, I'm not sure, but his right foot (our left) seems like it might be at the wrong angle.. I could be wrong though.
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| reborn574 | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 7:59 AM | Message # 5 |
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| Quote Looks better now. Also it might just be me, I'm not sure, but his right foot (our left) seems like it might be at the wrong angle.. I could be wrong though.
Hmm....it does seem pretty odd,it looked better when i was making it,Ill see what I can do with it.
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| MugenMaster | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 1:22 PM | Message # 6 |
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| He seems...very skinny to me. It's really the only thing that comes to mind right now...
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 5:32 PM | Message # 7 |
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| 'Good stuff! 
Just some things; The hands need some reworking. I know when I work on hands, I have pretty much 'done' with the sprite and I tend to give up. Try taking time, ranging from a few minutes or hopefully more, to resprite the hands (shading and all).
As far as the lower body goes- possibly consider redoing it altogether as I mention a few noticale things. Well, as the shading goes, like was said before, it still can be cleaner. Captain Falcon's close should be tight. Thus it should be straight shades almost reembling pillow shades. Can't explai it too well but fill i more lighter colors than dark, with the darker shades outlining th lighter ones. (I think that could possibly be the best approach unless you can execute it as a darker sprite)
Same goes for the shoes- they can use some 'cleaner' shading. Also, the white right above the shoes don't fit the same shading as the rest of the sprite. The outline of the leg is a little messy- and overal they get a little too skinny as well (as Mugen said) The left leg could use a different positioning.
Now face- it needs some reworking. I like it overall, but it's too slanted. A face should start off round, and still resemble a circle, sprited. I'm not sure how to say to fix it, but overall it could be straightened out.
If you want I could edit it and explain what I'm sayin with visuals, but it's up to you- then you can 're- edit the sprite with your own twist.
However, I really like this! Glad to see more custom spriters around. 'Props for the custom.
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| reborn574 | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 10:21 PM | Message # 8 |
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| Update on him  *changed color pallet,changed the legs a little bit.Remade the left arm and hand,added some other missing details to it*(ill fix the arms)
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 10:27 PM | Message # 9 |
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| Oh my- much muuuuch better! Excellent! The only think left I would critisize on would be the head.
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| reborn574 | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 10:32 PM | Message # 10 |
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| Quote Oh my- much muuuuch better! Excellent! The only think left I would critisize on would be the head.
Yeah,I was having trouble on the head so I sorta skipped it =P.Ill update it with a fixed version of the head.
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 11:03 PM | Message # 11 |
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| Okie dokie- sounds good! Are you going to do a super smash bros type project? Maybe a mugen game, or some kind? Possibly a lf2 mod? Or whatever else there is? If not, I encourage you to do so? Maybe we could do a sprited super smash bros type game maybe even animation series? Could be a decent way to start us off as a site. I would totally join you if you go through with this.
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| reborn574 | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 11:13 PM | Message # 12 |
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| Lol,I was actually going to go on a rampage and start spriting few of ssbb characters along with a handful anime characters.
Although it is a good idea so ill give it a shot on spriting ssbb.So if ya` want you could join me with this.
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 11:41 PM | Message # 13 |
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| Definitely- along with my other projects! xD I kind of want to get in on a megaman sheet. SO maybe that and a luigi for starters and I'll take it slow from there. xD
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| reborn574 | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 11:45 PM | Message # 14 |
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| Quote Definitely- along with my other projects! xD I kind of want to get in on a megaman sheet. SO maybe that and a luigi for starters and I'll take it slow from there. xD
Megaman?Lol I was gunna do that,I could help on that if you want me to.
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-23, 11:49 PM | Message # 15 |
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| xD for real? If you originally planned to make him, go ahead, and I'll help you xD If you want. Are you think classic megaman though? I was thinking maybe we could make different version...or you could make megaman and I can make blues (protoman)
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