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Reborn`s W.I.P stuff
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| reborn574 | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-02, 2:03 AM | Message # 31 |
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Fox W.I.P
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| SimTheDog | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-02, 6:36 PM | Message # 32 |
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| Quote (reborn574) UPDATE*
Fox W.I.P
The pose looks so unbalanced, the outlines are very choppy, and the anatomy is horrible. Before you sprite, learn your anatomy and shading; light source, shading techniques for clothes, skin, things like that.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| reborn574 | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 1:19 AM | Message # 33 |
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| SimTheDog | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 3:56 PM | Message # 34 |
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The stance has definitely improved. In the previous update, your shading was too light showing no contrast at all, but in this update, you've actually shocked me! You've actually used your own initiative to give the shading more contrast on the legs, but you've given the shading too much contrast, so tone it down a bit. His right leg should not have any light source at all, and his left leg should have no shading. Also, you've given the legs more contrast, but what about the rest of the body?
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| reborn574 | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-06, 3:05 AM | Message # 35 |
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| Quote The stance has definitely improved. In the previous update, your shading was too light showing no contrast at all, but in this update, you've actually shocked me! You've actually used your own initiative to give the shading more contrast on the legs, but you've given the shading too much contrast, so tone it down a bit. His right leg should not have any light source at all, and his left leg should have no shading. Also, you've given the legs more contrast, but what about the rest of the body?
Will do.
Also in the meantime I made Phoenix an attack.
(still a w.i.p need to add the paper)
 Yeah I know he looks pretty stiff :/
(And yes him throwing paper is an attack.He proved that paper can defeat people,he proved that in MvC3)
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| SimTheDog | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-08, 4:19 PM | Message # 36 |
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| Give the legs a bit of movement. Give him a slightly crouched stance (only slight) and then make him gradually stand up very straight when he throws his hit. Also, add more contrast to the shading. If you don't know what I mean by contrast, I mean that the light source and shade should look more obvious. Your contrast is too pale everywhere. Furthermore, don't animate the hair. Phoenix Wright's hair is thick, not thin, so don't animate it.
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