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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 8:40 PM | Message # 1 |
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| Okay, I decided to make a sprite once again, but since it's been quite a long time I really sprited, it doesn't look very good
That's why I'd appreciate it a lot if you could give some critique and comment on it.
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| SimTheDog | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 10:26 PM | Message # 2 |
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| That's a cool sprite, and it actually looks like Dexter, but there's some unnecessary shading on the front of the shirt, the hair can be shaded a bit better, and the face shouldn't have much lighting.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 10:29 PM | Message # 3 |
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| Quote (SimTheDog) there's some unnecessary shading on the front of the shirt
Are you talking about the part right above his hand?
Quote (SimTheDog) the hair can be shaded a bit better
Yes, you're right about that. I knew it could look better, but it didn't work out 
I should spend some more time on it 
Quote (SimTheDog) the face shouldn't have much lighting.
So basicly, you mean more darker shades on his head? 
Quote (SimTheDog) That's a cool sprite, and it actually looks like Dexter
Yeah, that was the hardest part, I really wanted him to look like Dex
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| Madara | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 10:29 PM | Message # 4 |
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| whos the dexter?
and yeah looks pretty good i like it
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 10:32 PM | Message # 5 |
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| Quote (Madara) whos the dexter?
Dexter Morgan is the main character of the series "Dexter"
http://www4.images.coolspotters.com/photos/201023/dexter-and-dexter-morgan-profile.jpg
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| snoop755 | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 10:41 PM | Message # 6 |
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| I was looking forward to see the cartoon network dexter lol
but I like the sprite alot
the colors look great together you gotta teach me how you do it  lol
nice job haku *thumbs up*
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 10:43 PM | Message # 7 |
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| Quote (snoop755) I was looking forward to see the cartoon network dexter lol
Whoopsie, I should've specified it
Quote (snoop755) but I like the sprite alot
Quote (snoop755) nice job haku *thumbs up*
Yaay Thank you!
Quote (snoop755) the colors look great together you gotta teach me how you do it surprised lol
Most of those colours are from Konan XD
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| SimTheDog | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 10:46 PM | Message # 8 |
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| Here's a quick edit that I made:
I hope it's good.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 10:50 PM | Message # 9 |
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| Quote (SimTheDog) Here's a quick edit that I made:
I hope it's good.
He looks pretty cool
I guess I'm just gonna edit his head a little bit more
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| SimTheDog | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 10:53 PM | Message # 10 |
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| Alright.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 10:55 PM | Message # 11 |
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| Actually, I don't really think it's necessary, now he looks more mature. That was one of the things that really annoyed me
Thanks Simmy
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| snoop755 | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 10:56 PM | Message # 12 |
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| I never seen a light source like that in Jus before
but sim your edit is still good
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 10:58 PM | Message # 13 |
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| Quote (snoop755) I never seen a light source like that in Jus before
but sim your edit is still good
I thought about that too, it looks neat, though it isn't very JUSsy.
But I guess mine isn't really JUS either
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| snoop755 | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 11:08 PM | Message # 14 |
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| Quote (HakuHuchiha) I thought about that too, it looks neat, though it isn't very JUSsy.
But I guess mine isn't really JUS either
yeah thats true
it's a little cleaner than Jus Imo
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-01, 11:14 PM | Message # 15 |
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| Quote (snoop755) it's a little cleaner than Jus Imo
True, true
But I really like it, it's some kind of improved or maybe even a more realistic JUS!
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