old and new version of aburame shibi
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ogy95 | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-19, 4:47 AM | Message # 1 |
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Ace | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-19, 4:52 AM | Message # 2 |
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| Not bad man! Your shading has definitely improved. Before I go in depth though, a bit of advice: When you're resizing a sprite to show it larger, select the sprite, right click, and go to stretch/skew. Then resize it both horizontally and vertically by 200% or 300%. That way the outlines won't appear jagged like that.
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SimTheDog | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-19, 7:55 PM | Message # 3 |
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| You don't know how to shade. I can see a lot of pillow shading on the trousers, and you had no idea of what you were doing when you were shading the jacket. The anatomy is really bad, and you also need to learn how to invent your own colours, and to be honest again, neither sprite is good, unfortunately.
Added (2012-01-19, 7:55 PM) --------------------------------------------- And I also noticed that nobody paid attention to your previous thread of these sprites, so you went on and made this one. I'll delete the other thread when Mugen Master is back, and if you do something as selfish as this again, you'll get disciplined.
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Ace | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-19, 10:48 PM | Message # 4 |
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| Quote (SimTheDog) And I also noticed that nobody paid attention to your previous thread of these sprites, so you went on and made this one. I'll delete the other thread when Mugen Master is back, and if you do something as selfish as this again, you'll get disciplined. Actually I think that was an accident. I replied on this thread as soon as it appeared. The other one came after.
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salindy13 | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 4:45 PM | Message # 5 |
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| The new sprite is just an edit of SND5 Shino. :/
don't click this link...
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Souleaterf | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 8:55 PM | Message # 6 |
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| Quote (salindy13) The new sprite is just an edit of SND5 Shino. :/ Also an edit or Gaara's gourd! lol
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ogy95 | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 9:33 PM | Message # 7 |
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| YEAH!!!! my works sucks,your works are professional,i know nothing about sprites and you guys know everything,sorry for posting any of my works,and ACE thanks for support and useful comments
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SimTheDog | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 10:05 PM | Message # 8 |
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| Quote (ogy95) YEAH!!!! my works sucks,your works are professional,i know nothing about sprites and you guys know everything,sorry for posting any of my works,and ACE thanks for support and useful comments If you aren't willing to accept constructive criticism, you can get the hell out of here. You're taking the piss. What gave you the impression that I was actually picking on you? If I didn't even care about helping you anyway, I would've either ignored your thread, or I'd just come here and shit chat to you. You're are ignorant, and nothing else.
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Souleaterf | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 10:51 PM | Message # 9 |
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| Quote (ogy95) YEAH!!!! my works sucks,your works are professional,i know nothing about sprites and you guys know everything,sorry for posting any of my works,and ACE thanks for support and useful comments smile They were just trying to help you become a better spriter.....But you do need to state if it's an edit and of what.
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salindy13 | Date: Friday, 2012-01-20, 11:32 PM | Message # 10 |
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| Quote (Souleaterf) They were just trying to help you become a better spriter.....But you do need to state if it's an edit and of what. That's the important thing.
don't click this link...
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Red | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-21, 7:34 PM | Message # 11 |
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| Quote (ogy95) YEAH!!!! my works sucks,your works are professional,i know nothing about sprites and you guys know everything,sorry for posting any of my works,and ACE thanks for support and useful comments That's criticism u idiot, the only reason they're saying that is to help you improve moar by acknowledging ur mistakes. But it looks like u know everything u need to know about spriting, u might aswell take your crappy edits and Quote (SimTheDog) get the hell out of here
-Too many sprites, So little time.
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-Batman
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ogy95 | Date: Monday, 2012-01-23, 2:00 PM | Message # 12 |
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| ok,sorry guys,i was kinda nervous when i said that shit,it will be good for me to leave this site,but i dont know how to delete my profile,can u help me with that.
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SimTheDog | Date: Monday, 2012-01-23, 3:27 PM | Message # 13 |
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| Quote (ogy95) ok,sorry guys,i was kinda nervous when i said that shit,it will be good for me to leave this site,but i dont know how to delete my profile,can u help me with that. You can't delete your Ucoz profile, and if you think that going to a whole new forum where everybody will start prasing you instead of actually being honest and telling you what you're doing wrong, you're never going to reach a decent level in spriting. Furthermore, if you don't like criticism and aren't willing to improve, you aren't ready for spriting. My advice for you is either to clean up on your attitude, or just take up a different hobby altogether.
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ogy95 | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-24, 3:10 AM | Message # 14 |
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| Quote (SimTheDog) You can't delete your Ucoz profile, and if you think that going to a whole new forum where everybody will start prasing you instead of actually being honest and telling you what you're doing wrong, you're never going to reach a decent level in spriting. Furthermore, if you don't like criticism and aren't willing to improve, you aren't ready for spriting. My advice for you is either to clean up on your attitude, or just take up a different hobby altogether. thanks for advice,actually i'm not just a spriter,i'm coder too,but i prefer using my own sprites for games and chars,that is the reason why i want to learn how to create good sprites,and i didn't get mad because of your sprite criticizms,i get mad because u said i'm selfish when i created two threats ,that was an accident,when this happens in other forums i just simple delete one of the threats,but here i can not do that.
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Red | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-24, 2:04 PM | Message # 15 |
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| Well if you want to learn how to create "good" sprites, u should first have to learn how to accept criticism.
-Too many sprites, So little time.
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