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| Ace | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-11, 7:35 AM | Message # 1 |
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| Here's a sprite of Cloud Strife in his outfit from Kingdom Hearts. Made this for a contest on dA. Not my best sprite, but I'm cutting myself some slack since it's custom.
What do you think?
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| Souleaterf | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-11, 11:28 AM | Message # 2 |
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| That hair can be a thousand times better and you know it.
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-11, 4:52 PM | Message # 3 |
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| Overall it's good, especially since it's from scratch, you're improving a lot! 
But, like Soul said, you didn't quite take your time for the hair, while you still have a lot of time left for this contest!!
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| Ace | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-11, 10:36 PM | Message # 4 |
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| Quote (Souleaterf) That hair can be a thousand times better and you know it.
Quote (HakuHuchiha) But, like Soul said, you didn't quite take your time for the hair, while you still have a lot of time left for this contest!!
Ugh I know, but I'm terrible at hair and I couldn't get it to come out right! I might give it another try... I really doubt I'll be able to get it looking good though.
Quote (HakuHuchiha) Overall it's good, especially since it's from scratch, you're improving a lot!
Thanks!
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| Souleaterf | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-12, 3:09 AM | Message # 5 |
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| Quote (Ace) I might give it another try
I sugguest seeing Goku or Gohans hair for a reference.
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| sgn_15 | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-12, 9:22 AM | Message # 6 |
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| i like the shading on the scarf (or whatever the red cloth on the neck is)
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| SimTheDog | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-12, 7:26 PM | Message # 7 |
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| It's better if you actually draw the body first and then add the clothes so that your sprite shapes up better. The eye-brows are too high, The fore-arms are too thick, your outlines aren't smooth, and you aren't shading correctly.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| Dancing-Flames | Date: Friday, 2012-01-13, 0:18 AM | Message # 8 |
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| Ugh, seriously, Sim, do you EVER say something positive? I mean, it's good that you crit. it but there was nothing positive in your comment! We're not all expert here, we're only learning how to sprite!
Anyway, Ace, I like it! Shading is nice IMO (or at least, better than I could ever do)
The only thing is that the hair could be better. But for the rest, nice work!
My DA: Saruman-II
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| Ace | Date: Friday, 2012-01-13, 1:50 AM | Message # 9 |
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| Quote (Dancing-Flames) Ugh, seriously, Sim, do you EVER say something positive? I mean, it's good that you crit. it but there was nothing positive in your comment! We're not all expert here, we're only learning how to sprite!
Lol don't be too hard on him. Even when it seems like someone's just bashing a sprite, he is trying to help me improve 
Quote (Dancing-Flames) Anyway, Ace, I like it! Shading is nice IMO (or at least, better than I could ever do)
The only thing is that the hair could be better. But for the rest, nice work!
Thanks man! I've been trying to improve the hair, no luck so far though 
Quote (SimTheDog) your outlines aren't smooth, and you aren't shading correctly.
Could you clarify on this bit for me? I'm not really sure where the error is, except for a part of his arm where I could improve the outline a bit.
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| Souleaterf | Date: Friday, 2012-01-13, 1:15 PM | Message # 10 |
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| Arm stomach shoes and hand are the major problems with outlines.
Message edited by Souleaterf - Friday, 2012-01-13, 1:16 PM |
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| LiveitBig | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 10:50 AM | Message # 11 |
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| I like the sprite, but isn't cloud suppose to have a third shade( like it is in the JUS style)? Also the hair brothers me, but it's your sprite.
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| Ace | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 10:56 AM | Message # 12 |
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| Quote (LiveitBig) I like the sprite, but isn't cloud suppose to have a third shade( like it is in the JUS style)? Also the hair brothers me, but it's your sprite.
Thanks There is a third shade in all the places where I thought I could put one in without it looking too cluttered. And the hair bothers everyone, including me XD I just still can't get good at spriting hair.
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| LiveitBig | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 11:08 AM | Message # 13 |
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| Oh. You probably try to make a small sheet on this, cause this is cool.
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| Ace | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 11:14 AM | Message # 14 |
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| Quote (LiveitBig) Oh. You probably try to make a small sheet on this, cause this is cool.
Hm... maybe. I doubt it though. He's a detailed enough character that a sheet would be troublesome.
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| LiveitBig | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-15, 11:25 AM | Message # 15 |
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| Quote (Ace) Hm... maybe. I doubt it though. He's a detailed enough character that a sheet would be troublesome.
Oh. I understand
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