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| ogy95 | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-10, 2:26 AM | Message # 1 |
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| some chojuro sprites by me
give credit if used
coment please 
Message edited by ogy95 - Tuesday, 2012-01-10, 2:27 AM |
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| Pinwheel | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-10, 2:36 AM | Message # 2 |
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| Incredibly stiff, doesn't look even remotely like him, his head has a bad shape to it, inconsistent with the size of his body. Oh, and to top it all off, you didn't mention what you edited, nor did you give credits to the person who ripped said sprites.
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| ogy95 | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-10, 2:40 AM | Message # 3 |
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| sprites are not edited
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| Ace | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-10, 6:00 AM | Message # 4 |
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| Well, Pin is right that they're stiff. With that base sprite, avoid using those straight, vertical lines, it makes it look unnatural. Also, the head is in an awkward position on the running frames, I'd advice moving it up a bit. Besides that, I'd say just work on the shading. I can see very little of it on the base, and it seems inconsistent between the walk and run (In the walk the shadow is on his back, but in the run it appears that the light source is to the left) Good effort, but it needs some more work put in. 
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| SimTheDog | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-10, 1:24 PM | Message # 5 |
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| His head is too big, all of the shading is too light, you've used outlines in unnecessary areas, you don't know how to shade, and your style is very inconsistent.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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