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My Optimus Prime project
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| Luminos | Date: Friday, 2011-12-30, 4:57 AM | Message # 1 |
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| As for now it's just a WIP ,hope I won't give it up too fast ...
Picking colours and painting general shape took be 'bout 5 hours ,I'm fucking slow.
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| snoop755 | Date: Friday, 2011-12-30, 5:12 AM | Message # 2 |
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| Can't really say anything about it right now
but I can't wait to see it done!
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| Ace | Date: Friday, 2011-12-30, 6:05 AM | Message # 3 |
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| The outline alone is looking amazing so far, best of luck to you with this! 
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| Luminos | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-31, 0:51 AM | Message # 4 |
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| As for now I concentrated on the background. When it's finished ,I'll take care of Optimus.
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| Madara | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-31, 3:34 AM | Message # 5 |
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| wow that looks really really amazing so far
you are a great spriter 
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| Luminos | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-31, 5:11 AM | Message # 6 |
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Next edit ... I'm not rly sure 'bout two things:
1. Are so many stars at the background are rly necessary?
2. NEXT 'BONUS' clouds I've just added should stay or not ( compare second image and third )
Help ma guys 
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-31, 5:14 AM | Message # 7 |
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| Personally, the cloud seems a bit odd. It's up to you though, I don't really see it hurting too much if it were gotten rid of, altered, or stays. As for the stars, I think they're fine but maybe you could represent them vanishing as they go lower and as they go closer past Optimus's head. Not sure if I am explaining too well.
Anyways amaazing piece bro! ^_^
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| Ace | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-31, 11:17 AM | Message # 8 |
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| Looking amazing so far man. Love what you did with the background. I really can't wait to see this as you continue making progress! As for the stars, It's really not a big deal either way. You might consider shrinking a few of the bigger stars, but beyond that it's fine.
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-31, 2:03 PM | Message # 9 |
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| Yeah, maybe there are a little bit too many stars, or they're too big, but as have been said before, it's not that big of a problem.
The new cloud doesn't really go well with the piece I'd leave it away.
It looks rly neat, but it looks like a pain in the ass too work inside out on that Optimus Prime 
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| Godblaster | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-31, 3:35 PM | Message # 10 |
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| make the clouds darker.
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| MugenMaster | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-31, 9:23 PM | Message # 11 |
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| Holy crap, your amazing xD
I love this, can't wait to see optimus done!
And yeah, I would cut back on the stars a bit.
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| reborn574 | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-01, 4:25 AM | Message # 12 |
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| This is turning out awesome.
I say lessen the stars or make them smaller,also I say get rid of the new clouds IMO.
Great job so far.
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| Souleaterf | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-01, 1:00 PM | Message # 13 |
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| The new clouds seem too white imo you should just remove them the stars are fine there are literally billions of them so if you have a lot it's w.e. Uhhhh lemme see not much else to crit I guess good use of the dither and the linework for otimus seems pretty good imo.
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| [Skull] | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-01, 2:34 PM | Message # 14 |
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| The WIP really looking good so far, intrigued to see the outcome of Optimus' outline
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| Luminos | Date: Monday, 2012-01-02, 2:56 AM | Message # 15 |
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As you can see ,here's an update.
I got rid of all the previous background ... all these stars looked unnatural. I think that now it looks way better ,what do you think guys ?
I'm nearly finished with the background ,only to the at the background is to erase this colour pallete and add some inscription "Optimus Prime" or simply "Transformers". I'll probably put it in the left top corner ,but yeah - I'll take care of it when I finish Optimus ... So ,now it's time for him.
PS Does anybody know why i could and now I can't edit my revious posts ? I wanted to put there latest edit so that everyone can see 'every single' step while doing this ...
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