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JUS Heishiro Mitsurugi
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 8:25 AM | Message # 1 |
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| Holy god, this took me forever...or at least it felt like it. >.<
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| snoop755 | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 8:29 AM | Message # 2 |
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| This is really good
its just too much detail on the his arm
makes the sprite look cluttered
good job looks like all this practice
is improving your skills
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 8:38 AM | Message # 3 |
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| Thanks a bunch! ^^
I most definitely had a hard time with that portion xD
I think it was better before I added the little designs int he clothes.
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| Ace | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 9:37 AM | Message # 4 |
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| It's great man, like I said over on dA. The only issue I see is that his armored arm might be a tad too big... might just be me though. Very good work
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 10:05 AM | Message # 5 |
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| No it's definitely not just you. The armor is too big for the rest. It also affected his arm length which is no good. I'll have to go over that soemtime soon. But thans bro! ^^
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 10:52 AM | Message # 6 |
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| I edited Mitsu a bit and added hong
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| Souleaterf | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 12:52 PM | Message # 7 |
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| That shoulder guard seems way too big and both sprites still have a ridiculous amount of black on black making the sprite look convuluted and uber dark aka makes your shading look alot worse than it really is.
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 6:52 PM | Message # 8 |
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| Thats odd I tried not to double any blacks unless it was to show foreshortening.
And on the pic it's similar to that high as well.
Thanks for the crit! ^^
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| MugenMaster | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 9:40 PM | Message # 9 |
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| Definitely your best JUS work~
Glad to see you improve, and I love that sprite xD
As for Hong, he seems a bit pillowed on his chest, at least to me.
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 11:40 PM | Message # 10 |
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| Thanks Mugen. Yeah I think I tried too much shading for jus and it made it seem pillowed.
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Finished Killick
Just need rafael and nightmare and then I'll move on xD
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| Ace | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 11:55 PM | Message # 11 |
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| Kilik looks cool man. But what's that white bit below his hand?
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| MugenMaster | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 0:05 AM | Message # 12 |
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| Quote (RetroMafioso) Finished Killick
Right now my biggest prob is the fact he's leaning to one side...that makes it look worse than it is.
Quote (RetroMafioso) Thanks Mugen
Anytime bro~
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 0:14 AM | Message # 13 |
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| I think I'll remake his lower body as well. Should clear the whole white part deal.
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| Souleaterf | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 0:31 AM | Message # 14 |
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| Quote (RetroMafioso) I think I'll remake his lower body as well. Should clear the whole white part deal.
:OOOOOOOO Fuck That Shit lol
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 0:49 AM | Message # 15 |
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| Quote (Souleaterf)
:OOOOOOOO Fuck That Shit lol
Am I missing something? lol
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