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Custom majin vegeta's stance
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| LiveitBig | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-04, 12:47 PM | Message # 1 |
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|  UPDATE#1(made the pic bigger) this is 95% custom I just use the same head from the vegeta sheet. I created this awhile back, maybe in september. This is my very first custom in Jus, so please critic and comment about my work, thanks.
This stance is from when he turn majin and he was fighting majin buu
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-04, 2:27 PM | Message # 2 |
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| The colours are the biggest problem
The blue lacks contrast, so that makes it pretty difficult to see the shading :s
It seems kinda impossibru to me for his right arm to be that high.
I mean, his upper arm can, alright
But I think his lower arm could be a little bit moved downwards, make the angle bigger
Or just move the whole arm a little more down
Or maybe it's just me 
His legs do look kinda skinny, though I know that's partly the style 
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| MugenMaster | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-04, 7:54 PM | Message # 3 |
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| Quote (LiveitBig) this is 95% custom
Quote (LiveitBig) This is my very first custom in Jus
There is no percentile custom.
It is not '100%' so it is an edit, even if you just used 1 pixel of the original sheet. There is nothing wrong with it, but it CANNOT be considered a custom sprite.
My opinion on the sprite itself however...I'd give it a 3/5 or 6/10
The colors are a large problem as stated above, but I think the hair kills it for me this time. It isn't bad, but it looks too block-y and unnatural, as well as too big. I would suggest using his SSJ hair as a reference.
Otherwise, It isn't bad. I can clearly see the stance you are shooting for and proportion wise I don't think I see any problems.(Aside from the hair)
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| Ace | Date: Monday, 2011-12-05, 1:56 AM | Message # 4 |
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| Quote (MugenMaster) but I think the hair kills it for me this time.
... wasn't that the part that he took from the sheet?
Anyway, it's really not too bad. You need to lower the right arm like Haku said though.
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| MugenMaster | Date: Monday, 2011-12-05, 2:41 AM | Message # 5 |
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| Quote (Ace) wasn't that the part that he took from the sheet?
I do not recall seeing the hair. The FACE, I do. Not the hair though.
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| LiveitBig | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-06, 2:50 AM | Message # 6 |
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| Quote (HakuHuchiha) The colours are the biggest problem
The blue lacks contrast, so that makes it pretty difficult to see the shading :s
It seems kinda impossibru to me for his right arm to be that high.
I mean, his upper arm can, alright
But I think his lower arm could be a little bit moved downwards, make the angle bigger
Or just move the whole arm a little more down
Or maybe it's just me
His legs do look kinda skinny, though I know that's partly the style
ok, I will make the sprite bigger so you can it better, and i'll try to edit his arm soon.
Quote (MugenMaster) There is no percentile custom.
It is not '100%' so it is an edit, even if you just used 1 pixel of the original sheet. There is nothing wrong with it, but it CANNOT be considered a custom sprite.
My opinion on the sprite itself however...I'd give it a 3/5 or 6/10
The colors are a large problem as stated above, but I think the hair kills it for me this time. It isn't bad, but it looks too block-y and unnatural, as well as too big. I would suggest using his SSJ hair as a reference.
Otherwise, It isn't bad. I can clearly see the stance you are shooting for and proportion wise I don't think I see any problems.(Aside from the hair)
No, I made the body,legs, hands and etc. The only thing I didn't make was the head and the hair, its at the bottom of the vegeta sheet from final explosion.
Quote (Ace) ... wasn't that the part that he took from the sheet?
Anyway, it's really not too bad. You need to lower the right arm like Haku said though
Yea, I got that from the sheet.
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| MugenMaster | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-06, 2:56 AM | Message # 7 |
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| Quote (LiveitBig) The only thing I didn't make was the head and the hair, its at the bottom of the vegeta sheet from final explosion.
Just checked, and yes, ya did.
But it still isn't very good...it needs to be cleaned up a bit,
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| LiveitBig | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-06, 7:41 AM | Message # 8 |
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| Quote (MugenMaster)
Just checked, and yes, ya did.
But it still isn't very good...it needs to be cleaned up a bit,
What should I clean up and should i leave the hand?
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| MugenMaster | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-06, 10:28 PM | Message # 9 |
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| (Thanks for making it larger, it is much easier to see now!)
Quote (LiveitBig) What should I clean up
There are clashing outlines, that I do not like.
Quote (LiveitBig) should i leave the hand?
I don't see anything wrong with that in particular.
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-07, 2:02 PM | Message # 10 |
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| Quote (LiveitBig) UPDATE#1(made the pic bigger)
Dat camel toe 
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| SimTheDog | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-07, 8:10 PM | Message # 11 |
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| You don't have any idea of how to shade. Actually asking how to do it will be of great benefit.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| LiveitBig | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 9:26 PM | Message # 12 |
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| Quote (MugenMaster) There are clashing outlines, that I do not like.
Oh, I think i know where you are talking about, It is where the hands and the face is right? but i don't really know how should fix it. Any suggestions MM ?
Quote (HakuHuchiha) Dat camel toe
lmao, I tried to copy the style,
Quote (SimTheDog) You don't have any idea of how to shade. Actually asking how to do it will be of great benefit.
Yea, i don't really know to shade. Can you show me or give me advice how to shade?
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| MugenMaster | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 1:12 AM | Message # 13 |
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| Quote (LiveitBig) Can you show me or give me advice how to shade?
In paint or gimp or whatever you use to Sprite, make a sphere.
Color that sphere.
Now, choose any side of it. Pretend there is a lightbulb there and everything else is dark. Shade from the light source, dithering helps as well if you do so.
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