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Working on a style (Added Choji Akimichi and Yusuke Urameshi
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 7:29 PM | Message # 1 |
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| .Choji Akimichi
.Yusuke Urameshi
What do you guys think? I need to do some reworking here and there, and I'll probably in the future end up re-basing him. But for now here we are.
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 8:20 PM | Message # 2 |
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| Well, the Yusuke isnt't good, I'll just say that
I won't give critique on that one, because I'm pretty sure you realise that too
The Chouji seems pretty big, but maybe that's just style
The style kinda reminds me of SND, and I'm not a bit fan.
His pose is weird, because his lower body is positioned in front view, while the upper body is in profile.
Oh yeah, regarding his stance, HIS right foot should be at least one pixel under HIS left foot, if you know what I mean.
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 8:24 PM | Message # 3 |
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| Yea I guess he kind of looks like a mentally challenged dinosaur. It was a rough sprite.
The style- yes is that big. And I'm not quite sure I get what you mean about the two proportions of the body being different- the upper and lower body part. But I get what you mean about the feet! Nice eye, mate! Thanks! 
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| Luciole2831 | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 8:32 PM | Message # 4 |
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| It would look better if you were spriting a zombie instead of a normal character.
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 8:35 PM | Message # 5 |
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| Quote (RetroMafioso) I'm not quite sure I get what you mean about the two proportions of the body being different- the upper and lower body part
I'm not talking about the proportions, but about the position.
These 2 parts aren't facing the right direction
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 8:40 PM | Message # 6 |
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| Oh so like his upper body is facing more right and his lower body is more straight?
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 8:48 PM | Message # 7 |
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| I know, them proportions of what I did ain't right, but do you see what I try to say?
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 8:53 PM | Message # 8 |
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| Yea I got it! Thanks^^
-The upper body is facing one way and the lower is more central-focused.
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 8:55 PM | Message # 9 |
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| Quote (RetroMafioso) -The upper body is facing one way and the lower is more central-focused.
Exactly!!
Phew, am I ever glad that worked 
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 9:00 PM | Message # 10 |
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| I'll redo the sprite when I get back to the project xD But with the new stance relying on what you've told me. Thanks a tons! ^^
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| MugenMaster | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 9:24 PM | Message # 11 |
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| Hmmm...since your going for your own style there isn't much I can say, besides work on your proportions and-a dammit someone said that already >.<
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 9:31 PM | Message # 12 |
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| Quote (MugenMaster) Hmmm...since your going for your own style there isn't much I can say, besides work on your proportions and-a dammit someone said that already >.<
Hehehe
BTW, grammar nazi
Quote (MugenMaster) since your going
you're 
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| Ace | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 10:23 PM | Message # 13 |
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| Chouji isn't too bad, just what Haku said. Yusuke needs quite a bit of work though. I wouldn't have known it was him if you hadn't said so 
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| SimTheDog | Date: Monday, 2011-11-28, 2:36 AM | Message # 14 |
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| Quote (HakuHuchiha) I know, them proportions of what I did ain't right, but do you see what I try to say?
Case closed.
Quote (RetroMafioso) .Yusuke Urameshi
It's very bad. The outlines aren't consistent, the legs are too far apart, it's pillow shaded, and the anatomy is horrible.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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