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| Fantom13 | Date: Friday, 2011-11-18, 9:34 PM | Message # 1 |
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100% by me ^^
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-19, 0:25 AM | Message # 2 |
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| Though I can spot multiple mistakes, I actually really like this!
Your biggest problem is the shading. You have multiple light sources, you apply pillow shading!!!
And oh yeah, the shading is pretty flat. With that I mean you did shade some parts via a light source, but you didn't really take in account that you also have to make sure you shade via the material, if you know what I mean
You use too much colours sometimes, like HIS left arm.
HIS right leg also looks pretty weird, though I can see what you tried to do there. I just hope you also see there's something wrong with it.
And you didn't always applied the perspective right, like in HIS right leg or his "ponytail". Especially the last one. His hair looks like his head looks to to OUR right, while his head is looking down. That's quite a problem too! 
Even though I have all this criticism, it is actually a good sprite!!
Just fix some stuff, and I'm really looking forward to see more!! 
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| MugenMaster | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-19, 0:45 AM | Message # 3 |
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| Aye, the shading is the biggest problem. Otherwise I liked the outline-it is really good to say the least. But onto the review, shall we~?
The shading of the armor and hair are the biggest faults in this piece. It seems...too clustered and random, as if you just splattered light on it. Otherwise, his legs are the next biggest. They are a little rubbery and the folds/creases of the pants seem very random.
Once it is fixed I think it'll be much better, but for now, I'd have to give it a 6/10(or a 3/5).
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| LiveitBig | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-19, 1:05 AM | Message # 4 |
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| The shading is a major problem, creases/folds in the pants are shaded in the wrong area (to me) and i don't know where your light source is coming from.
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| Ace | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-19, 9:21 AM | Message # 5 |
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| Well, like they said the shading is the biggest downfall. I gotta say though, I love this sprite!
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