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incompleted shibi and chojuro
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| ogy95 | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 2:59 AM | Message # 1 |
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:03 AM | Message # 2 |
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| Do you mind putting the sheet in 'spoiler' [code]?
But, nonetheless I love your sprites! They're awesome! I would reccomend makig the Chojuro sprite's legs/lower body longer. And decrease the overall head size just a bit. Adding shading would be good- but it's your style! ^-^
Also were you going for 'nzc' [style] for the shibi sheet?
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| ogy95 | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:11 AM | Message # 3 |
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| i didnt plain this shibi to be NCZ...its just coincidence
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| Ace | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:18 AM | Message # 4 |
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| I'm not a fan of the style, but that sheet is very well done. Good job 
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| ogy95 | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:20 AM | Message # 5 |
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| Quote (SharinganAce) I'm not a fan of the style, but that sheet is very well done. Good job
thanks... 
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:21 AM | Message # 6 |
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| Quote (ogy95) its just coincidence
Well, I still liek it a lot. But I was going to say if it was NZC, it should have a little variation in the proportions. He would have to be bigger. However you didn't exactly wish to execute that style- so forget that. xD
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| ogy95 | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 3:24 AM | Message # 7 |
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| Quote (RetroMafioso) so forget that
ok...
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Monday, 2011-10-24, 9:20 AM | Message # 8 |
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| The biggest problem with the sheet is that it ain't homogen.
With that I mean that the different parts (hair, head, body, legs, thing on back)aren't in the same style.
The hair could use some more definition, and maybe an extra colour
The colours on the vest should have more contrast, and maybe less flat shading: try making it look realistic
And that's my critic on the pants too! The contrast is good there, but the shading's soooo dull 
Some outlines could be better too.
But overall, it ain't bad
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| ogy95 | Date: Wednesday, 2011-10-26, 1:11 AM | Message # 9 |
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| Quote (HakuHuchiha) HakuHuchiha
i think its good for my first sprite sheet,anyway thanks for advices,they can be useful in my next creations...
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