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Cooler By LiveitBig
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| LiveitBig | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 0:51 AM | Message # 1 |
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|  Can someone tell me how i should set cooler's hand, in the correct way. Credits to JCDXGerenation for the shoulder pads or armor. Credits to Darkphyuss for the Colors. Credits to Axxon, Mistah Jayden, AngryBoy, YungBlaze, URP and Kobushi for the refence
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| Ace | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 1:03 AM | Message # 2 |
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| Looks pretty good man. Some parts still need shading and it could use some more contrast, but overall looks alright.
Why did you jpeg it though?
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 1:04 AM | Message # 3 |
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| Is it just me, or are the legs waaaay to small for his body?
I've never seen him, I guess
Also, jpeg, srsly? 
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| LiveitBig | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 1:12 AM | Message # 4 |
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| Quote (Ace) Looks pretty good man. Some parts still need shading and it could use some more contrast, but overall looks alright.
Why did you jpeg it though?
Please, point out the parts that have no shade so i could work on it.
Quote (HakuHuchiha) Is it just me, or are the legs waaaay to small for his body?
I've never seen him, I guess
Also, jpeg, srsly?
Lol, I don't want to make Cooler too big! And long story, do you want me to pm you the sprite so you can see the colors better?
Message edited by LiveitBig - Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 1:13 AM |
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| Ace | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 1:20 AM | Message # 5 |
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| Quote (LiveitBig) do you want me to pm you the sprite so you can see the colors better?
you could just post it lol.
And mainly you need to work on the shading on the white armor. Parts of it don't seem to have any shading, and all of it needs some more contrast.
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| Pinwheel | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 5:14 AM | Message # 6 |
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| I would judge it, but you decided to do two of the dumbest things any person doing pixelart can do: Resizing and JPEGing a picture for no apparant reason. The sprite doesn't even look that good to begin with, but yeah.
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| Souleaterf | Date: Tuesday, 2012-01-17, 5:28 AM | Message # 7 |
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| I agree with Pin. If you want actual crit I atleast need to see it in its normal size.
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| LiveitBig | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-19, 0:20 AM | Message # 8 |
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| Quote (Ace) you could just post it lol.
And mainly you need to work on the shading on the white armor. Parts of it don't seem to have any shading, and all of it needs some more contrast.
Ok I will post it. I know the shading is a bit off, but I will edit that after it is just the arms that I need help on.
Quote (Pinwheel) I would judge it, but you decided to do two of the dumbest things any person doing pixelart can do:
Yea I know, I wanted to JPEG my sprite :p, but i'll change it so you can see it in .png.
Quote (Pinwheel) Resizing and JPEGing a picture for no apparant reason.
LOL, how are you telling me that I have no reason? Please explain to me, because I don't understand how you are saying I don't have a reason, but I do.
Quote (Pinwheel) The sprite doesn't even look that good to begin with, but yeah.
1. Did I sprite this for you or myself? 2. I never saw none your work before, so I don't know if your an expect or a little kid with bad ideas. 3. If you don't want to help me get better, why comment? 4. If you want to judge something, don't say it is horrible, point out the spots, so the person can see and understand what you're saying.
Quote (Souleaterf) I agree with Pin. If you want actual crit I atleast need to see it in its normal size.
Yea, I am going to post it right now.Added (2012-01-19, 0:20 AM)
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| Souleaterf | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-19, 1:22 AM | Message # 9 |
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| Ok pretty cool the biggest annoyance I have besides the unfinished hands and arm guards is the head, it needs to be shaded! You like half shaded it so I feel obligated to address that it needs to be shaded, also the belly is too long. The muscles on the closest arm look reaaaally weird.
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| LiveitBig | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-19, 1:51 AM | Message # 10 |
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| Update- Made the secondary color darker  Added (2012-01-19, 1:51 AM)
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Quote (Souleaterf) the unfinished hands and arm guards
-__- same here, I am not really so good with poses. That's why I asked for help.Quote (Souleaterf) also the belly is too long
Some parts are not the stomach, it cooler's waist, due to his choice of not wearing any clothes.Quote (Souleaterf) The muscles on the closest arm look reaaaally weird.
The left arm right(our left)?
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| Souleaterf | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-19, 2:04 AM | Message # 11 |
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| Quote (LiveitBig) The left arm right(our left)?
Yes
Quote (LiveitBig) -__- same here, I am not really so good with poses. That's why I asked for help.
The pose is fine.
Chest is majorly pillowed btw.
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| LiveitBig | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-19, 4:13 AM | Message # 12 |
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| Quote (Souleaterf) Chest is majorly pillowed btw.
Ok, I will try to shade it in a different way.Added (2012-01-19, 3:14 AM)
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Hey Souleater, can you tell me where I should put his muscles for his left arm? Added (2012-01-19, 4:13 AM)
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 Is this any better, than the other one?
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| Souleaterf | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-19, 7:44 AM | Message # 13 |
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| Yeah it is and as for the muscles, emulate the Shenron I made, it'll be easier than explaining it haha
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