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Bluenote Stinger WIP
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| sgn_15 | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-12, 10:21 AM | Message # 1 |
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| won't really call myself a spriter but I do sprite or edit sprites when I get bored or I need sprites for something
-edited from jose porla
- no outer coat (white) yet
references:
http://fairytail.wikia.com/wiki/Bluenote_Stinger
style:
http://sdb.drshnaps.com/game.php?game=1979
comment what i need to fix
Message edited by sgn_15 - Thursday, 2012-01-12, 10:21 AM |
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| Souleaterf | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-12, 12:30 PM | Message # 2 |
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| It seems that you've kept the goatee even though the character doesn't have one?
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| sgn_15 | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-12, 5:31 PM | Message # 3 |
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| Quote (Souleaterf) It seems that you've kept the goatee even though the character doesn't have one?
yeah i have not removed it. well it is not done yet anyway.
here is the update
- added coat with design (G sign or whatever the hell it is) with akainu as reference
- increased the size of the end of his ponytail (watch the episodes and saw it is bigger)
- removed goatee lol
Souleaterf, what is a good color to outline the coat?
can you give me more specific comments? i will expand this because i will use it. at least expand to a move (also from existing jose poses)
guess the others who saw this already but did not comment were "not a single fuck was given" scenarios eh? >.>
Message edited by sgn_15 - Thursday, 2012-01-12, 5:33 PM |
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| SimTheDog | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-12, 7:20 PM | Message # 4 |
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| Which sprite am I supposed to be looking at?
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| sgn_15 | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-12, 7:35 PM | Message # 5 |
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| Quote (SimTheDog) Which sprite am I supposed to be looking at?
if you looked at the wiki link, it should be obvious >.>
anyway, it is the 3rd sprite from left (the one with white coat)
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| Luminos | Date: Friday, 2012-01-13, 1:52 AM | Message # 6 |
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| I do not know this guy ,but the sprite itself looks pretty interesting ,I'd love to see it finished
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| Ace | Date: Friday, 2012-01-13, 2:03 AM | Message # 7 |
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| Not bad. Based on the ref, I think you might have made the circle on his clothes a bit too big though.
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| sgn_15 | Date: Friday, 2012-01-13, 10:31 AM | Message # 8 |
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| the coat is actually a good way to make the guy seem more muscular, jose is a skinny fag XD
Quote (Ace) Not bad. Based on the ref, I think you might have made the circle on his clothes a bit too big though.
the part at the left was my other try for the size of the sun on his clothes, but it does not look good, especially when I add the rays
Quote (Luminos) I do not know this guy ,but the sprite itself looks pretty interesting ,I'd love to see it finished
not really finished as in a sheet, but like an attack animation only was planned. but i showed it to my spriter friend in another site first. ask him what else needs to be fixed because at first he said coat is too bright, will give me more critic later he said.
thanks for comment
p.s. i think I went to this site a little late XD
the site activity is gone XD
Message edited by sgn_15 - Friday, 2012-01-13, 10:33 AM |
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| Souleaterf | Date: Friday, 2012-01-13, 1:18 PM | Message # 9 |
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| Well school started for some kids and yadda yadda I think the coat colors are too light though. The away outline of the coat lacks depth. Fix it sir.
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| SimTheDog | Date: Friday, 2012-01-13, 5:19 PM | Message # 10 |
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| What is the color of your light source? because every color is getting affected by the light differently.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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