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RetroMafioso

Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-21, 4:33 AM | Message # 1

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I'll post all the stuff that i would be posting on the Dotto thread, so I won't flood it xD

Well here we are:

-Fixed (hopefully) Sai
-Added Kabuto Yakushi (The hair is bothering me. 'And that belt thing)
-Added Orochimaru (Need some pointers on shading. I will eventually get around to fixing his belt thing)

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Message edited by RetroMafioso - Wednesday, 2011-12-21, 4:34 AM

Pinwheel

Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-21, 4:49 AM | Message # 2

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Hair and face have extremely odd position on Kabuto's side. Legs are short and stubby, body is long. His arms.. I don't even fucking know. They look like tapeworms. Shading doesn't even look like it has much contrast.

Sai's arms are short, need to be a few pixels longer. Head is too big for his body, or his body is too stocky to be Sai. Sai's an anorexic, emotionless, pale queer. Make his skin paler and him skinnier.

Orochimaru is all sorts of fucked up. His position isn't like anybody elses, so the angle is just about completely wrong. One arm is basically missing from the angle that should be shown. Nobody stands with their arms like that either unless they're autistic or something, just straight to the side with bent knees. His hair covering his face, really? That's about the dumbest thing you could do. His robe, or whatever it is, looks a bit pillowed on his right shoulder.

MugenMaster

Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-21, 6:13 AM | Message # 3

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Quote (Pinwheel)

That's about the dumbest thing you could do.

Play nice Pin.

Although Pinwheel did pretty much cover everything, but what I don't like the most is the elongated arm on Kabuto(as well as his glasses being too large) and the amounts of pillowing on Orochimaru(Waist-covering, Face, Hair, Shoulder)

Deshar

Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-21, 10:26 PM | Message # 4

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Nobody stands with their arms like that either unless they're autistic or something, just straight to the side with bent knees.

I take offense to that.

Ace

Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 0:20 AM | Message # 5

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Sai is the best one there. Kabuto, definitely oughtta fix his arm, it looks too long. Orochimaru, I don't think you should have his hair covering his face and the pose needs work.

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