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| SimTheDog | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-05, 8:30 PM | Message # 31 |
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| The punch looks too slow.
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| Souleaterf | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-05, 10:07 PM | Message # 32 |
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| Quote (HakuHuchiha) Well, they don't really stand out. The best thing that you did was changing the size of his body armor.
I made his concept waaaay back in my Byond days so Im not surprised but I like the hair and the armour a ton :3
Quote (HakuHuchiha) Well, your OC doesn't have that many differences with the previous one.
I didn't know what else to change!
Quote (SimTheDog) The punch looks too slow.
Dat Speed!
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| snoop755 | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-05, 10:49 PM | Message # 33 |
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| Quote (HakuHuchiha) Well, your OC doesn't have that many differences with the previous one.
Yeh what he said but I really like the design of this OC aswell thats why I fave it on DA :3
but the hair is not that original, it looks like goku's with the back cut off but meh
also the spike in the back sticking up looks weird change it back!
overall good with the saiyan 
Cell: is good also
but the wing is getting a little inconsistent in size compared to the stance
but great job on the animation
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| Souleaterf | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-05, 11:11 PM | Message # 34 |
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| Quote (snoop755) but the wing is getting a little inconsistent in size compared to the stance
GOD DAMN IT WHO TOLD YOU!?? So it's true, for the wing every tyme I animate it I just scribble a really elongated oval with no intention or care for continuity, until dis guy decides to go and realize what I've been doing! I'll fix that asap.........D:
Quote (snoop755) also the spike in the back sticking up looks weird change it back!
Alright, I wasn't sure about it when I did it but I thought it looked weird being stand alone before :X
Quote (snoop755) but the hair is not that original, it looks like goku's with the back cut off but meh
Nuh-UHH Mynes got lyke a brown tint to it! But imo it looks more like teen gohans hair with some extra pizazz lol
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| snoop755 | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-05, 11:20 PM | Message # 35 |
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| lol i suggest watching cell vs gohan a little bit
and study how cell wings are
if you do this your sprite could be
more accurate
Message edited by snoop755 - Thursday, 2012-01-05, 11:24 PM |
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-05, 11:24 PM | Message # 36 |
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| Quote (Souleaterf)
Nuh-UHH Mynes got lyke a brown tint to it! But imo it looks more like teen gohans hair with some extra pizazz lol
With... Some... Extra... Pizza?
Seriously? XD
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| Souleaterf | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-07, 12:57 PM | Message # 37 |
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| Quote (HakuHuchiha) With... Some... Extra... Pizza?
Pizza /= Pizazz you clown. Pizza is delicious and pizazz is styl'n DUUUUUH
Little update on him
Quote (snoop755) lol i suggest watching cell vs gohan a little bit
and study how cell wings are
if you do this your sprite could be
more accurate
I've been watching his video game battles.......in those they seem stiff as a fucking rock, so I've tried to follow that within reason thus far....but I often stray away from that due to the weird angles I'd have to draw them at.........Yeah in other words I've been rage quitting alot lol.
I fixed the Cell wing length but instead of re-animating it I'll just post the sheet up after I finish the damage sprites.
Also here's me in Pixels
Message edited by Souleaterf - Saturday, 2012-01-07, 1:48 PM |
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Saturday, 2012-01-07, 3:27 PM | Message # 38 |
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| Quote (Souleaterf) Pizza /= Pizazz you clown. Pizza is delicious and pizazz is styl'n DUUUUUH
Lies! It's all the same! 
Quote (Souleaterf) Also here's me in Pixels
Well, since I have no idea how you look, I have no reference, but it looks good
The only thing that annoys me is that without the hat, it could be me 
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| Souleaterf | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-11, 11:31 AM | Message # 39 |
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Rob Lucci.
Quote (HakuHuchiha) The only thing that annoys me is that without the hat, it could be me
We're just two hot guys having a good time having a good time lol
Message edited by Souleaterf - Wednesday, 2012-01-11, 1:48 PM |
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2012-01-11, 4:56 PM | Message # 40 |
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| Quote (Souleaterf) Rob Lucci.
He seems... quite familiar. Is it possible that this is a revamp of an older sprite of yours?
Quote (Souleaterf) We're just two hot guys having a good time having a good time lol
Sure, I can live with that XD
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| Souleaterf | Date: Monday, 2012-01-16, 6:25 AM | Message # 41 |
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| Quote (HakuHuchiha) He seems... quite familiar. Is it possible that this is a revamp of an older sprite of yours?
see page 1 lol Also I put him on DA like age ago but I forgot to put him on here :XAdded (2012-01-16, 6:25 AM)
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Guys I need crit on this Syn Shenron and the Omega Shenron......they seem bad to me D:
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| LiveitBig | Date: Monday, 2012-01-16, 6:45 AM | Message # 42 |
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| the dragonball on omega's head and the horn behind his head,but other than that. This is the best syn or omega Jus sprite, i have ever lay my two eyes on
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| Souleaterf | Date: Monday, 2012-01-16, 7:12 AM | Message # 43 |
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| Quote (LiveitBig) the dragonball on omega's head and the horn behind his head,but other than that. This is the best syn or omega Jus sprite, i have ever lay my two eyes on
Is that better?
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| RetroMafioso | Date: Monday, 2012-01-16, 7:17 AM | Message # 44 |
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| To me, all I can say is the hands look weird and the chest could be edited a bit. other than thats I really like it!
Horns are a pain to sprite.
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| Souleaterf | Date: Monday, 2012-01-16, 4:21 PM | Message # 45 |
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| Quote (RetroMafioso) Horns are a pain to sprite.
Horns are a pain to sprite.
Everything is now puuurrfect?
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Do you guys think I need more contrast in the sprite or maybe the shading is kinda pillowed? Also do the arms look right?
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