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Liveitbig's JUS Bardock
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| LiveitBig | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-07, 1:48 AM | Message # 1 |
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|  well I'm trying to make a custom move for bardock, I based it off from one of bardock's move in budokai 3. I need help on creating the boots and the hands. The head and the hair is the only thing i didn't create, I created the rest (body, boots, legs and etc). Please help me out on this sprite.
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| MugenMaster | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-07, 2:39 AM | Message # 2 |
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| I like this, actually.
My favorite things are the legs(not the foot...) and the chest~
The outstretched arm seems to be the largest problem n my opinion. The muscle is too defined and his hand is turned an awkward way. The foot is also at a weird angle, at least from out perspective. (BTW, give credit to Vash32 for making the head you used!)
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| LiveitBig | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-07, 2:59 AM | Message # 3 |
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| Quote (MugenMaster) I like this, actually.
My favorite things are the legs(not the foot...) and the chest~
The outstretched arm seems to be the largest problem n my opinion. The muscle is too defined and his hand is turned an awkward way. The foot is also at a weird angle, at least from out perspective. (BTW, give credit to Vash32 for making the head you used!)
I did not you vash32's bardock head, I got it from goku and edit it the way that my partner did it on his sheet (not vash32) (spritenerd) and look in budokai 3 his arm is like that, but the hands i have problems with like i don't know how to make a hand in JUS, but i'll keep on pratice, The way I made the chest like that is because i wanted to copy the anime's armour. And I don't take people's stuff without giving them credits, that's unlike meAdded (2011-12-07, 2:59 AM)
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but the muscles i think I went to far with them, but it looks weird without them 
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-07, 2:06 PM | Message # 4 |
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| Quote (LiveitBig) but the muscles i think I went to far with them, but it looks weird without them tongue
Yes, yes you did
Also, the biggest prob is see now, is the contrast again
It's difficult to extinguish the different shades in the sprite, which is a big no-no in JUS
Also, you should shade the with things on his chest, it looks a little bit odd right now 
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| LiveitBig | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 9:33 PM | Message # 5 |
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| Quote (HakuHuchiha) Also, the biggest prob is see now, is the contrast again
It's difficult to extinguish the different shades in the sprite, which is a big no-no in JUS
What do you mean by contrast, Haku? do you want me to make my pic bigger too? so you can see the sprite better
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 9:47 PM | Message # 6 |
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| Quote (LiveitBig) do you want me to make my pic bigger too? so you can see the sprite better
Nah, that's not the prob
You should be able to see the shading very well, even when it's at its normal size
Quote (LiveitBig) What do you mean by contrast, Haku
If the contrast is high between the shades, it's easier to distinguish them from each other
Vice versa, if the contrast between the shades is low, it becomes difficult to see difference between them
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| reborn574 | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 11:40 PM | Message # 7 |
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| The knee seems off on his left (our right) leg IMO.
Maybe its just me though =P
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| Souleaterf | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-15, 8:15 AM | Message # 8 |
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| Red that arm it doesn't make sense. Add shading to the white lines on that armor. The shading on the tail doesn't make sense.
Overall I do not like this stance it seem awkward and REALLY difficult to make. I say switch it up.
The Bardock is quite good though.
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| LiveitBig | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 9:33 PM | Message # 9 |
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| Quote (Souleaterf) Red that arm it doesn't make sense. Add shading to the white lines on that armor. The shading on the tail doesn't make sense.
Overall I do not like this stance it seem awkward and REALLY difficult to make. I say switch it up.
The Bardock is quite good though.
Ok, i will fix the shading, and i not so good at making hands, and it's not a stance, it's the move that he use on frieza. This is what i used as a reference http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZMWSOp3qdow 1:58
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| Souleaterf | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 0:34 AM | Message # 10 |
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| Ah yes, that was my favorite attack in that game!
Riot Javelin ftw.
Make his head face more to the right and shorten his far away arm.
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