| fadli_HULK | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 1:24 PM | Message # 1 |
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Comment Please !!!!!!!!
Wips
Code
GM-FHMuuTsuchi2 = 70%
GM-FHChiyo = 30%
GM-FHRikuRutoV2 = 20%
Screnpack
Fairy Tail Screenpack = 20%
Message edited by fadli_HULK - Thursday, 2011-11-10, 1:34 PM |
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| SimTheDog | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 2:52 PM | Message # 2 |
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| First of all, that isn't anywhere near NZC at all! The outlines are meant to be a very deep shade of blue. You edited the stance off AMT Naruto's Tsunade and ruined it. The only thing that you actually made was the arm and edited the leggings. The recoloring is very pale, you pillow shaded her left arm which is a no-no, your outlines are choppy as hell, and despite me posting tutorials on spriting and anatomy, you still ignored those and went on to do your own messy thing. You didn't even spend one second to study NZC style, your knowledge of spriting is very awful. There's a reason why I posted the tutorials on spriting and anatomy and it was to prevent mistakes like these! You've made such a lazy attempt at spriting probably the easiest style ever and still failing. Thread closed. Get your act together because you have no sort of dignity whatsoever.
Despite my criticism (I'm sorry if I appeared intimidating), just take your time and check out a few important things. These threads will help you a lot sprite-wise and anatomy-wise:
http://pixelgen.ucoz.com/forum/11-122-1
http://pixelgen.ucoz.com/forum/11-121-1
If you don't feel that you're on the right track, just know that I've got your back.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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