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Starkiller W.I.P 99% custom
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| Revan777 | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 0:41 AM | Message # 1 |
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| MugenMaster | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 5:26 AM | Message # 2 |
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| Before I say anything, I need to clarify that if it is NOT 100% it is NOT a custom. Furthermore, It's a little small, could you enlargen it a bit to show?
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| SimTheDog | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 3:42 PM | Message # 3 |
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| What a cute little sprite, daaaawwww!
Enlarged version:
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| SimTheDog | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 3:49 PM | Message # 4 |
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| To begin with, the feet are horribly posed, the face is too long for it's size, I don't know what that is around his neck so I'll need you to tell me what it is. It looks like you had no idea what you was doing when shading his left arm, and speaking of his arm, his shoulders look dislocated. Also, compared to the rest of the body, the hairs light source is different, in other words, you flopped the shading of his hair. Overall, you didn't put any effort into this sprite at all. You also pointed out that it's a 99% custom. It doesn't matter if it's even 99.9% recurring, it's still an edit. What did you even edit anyway?
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| HakuHuchiha | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 4:02 PM | Message # 5 |
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| Quote (SimTheDog) What did you even edit anyway?
It seems to me like JUS Sasuke or something
And I agree with Sim, there's bad shading overall, you didn't even bother to shade his feet, and there are a lot of mistakes that could maybe be explainable for a custom sprite, but not for an edit...
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| Ace | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 10:02 PM | Message # 6 |
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| It's not all that bad. Still, Sim's right that the shading needs a whole lot of work. And Starkiller doesn't really have hair, just a buzzcut. Apart from that, fix the arm and The feet, and we'll see what it looks like from there. It was a nice attempt, but still needs some more work 
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| Madara | Date: Friday, 2011-11-04, 11:04 PM | Message # 7 |
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| Quote (HakuHuchiha) It seems to me like JUS Sasuke or something
because it is jus sasuke edit
a jus gamer like me see that with one look
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| Luciole2831 | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-05, 1:18 AM | Message # 8 |
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| Irony think its so much that its an edit. Its more because of there is little to no shading.
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| Viz | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-05, 2:59 AM | Message # 9 |
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| Quote (Luciole2831) Irony think its so much that its an edit. Its more because of there is little to no shading.
How is that ironic?
And the sprite is pretty terrible.
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| SimTheDog | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-05, 3:57 PM | Message # 10 |
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| Quote (SharinganAce) It's not all that bad. Still, Sim's right that the shading needs a whole lot of work. And Starkiller doesn't really have hair, just a buzzcut. Apart from that, fix the arm and The feet, and we'll see what it looks like from there. It was a nice attempt, but still needs some more work
Being polite and lying at the same time isn't always the best thing to do. It wasn't a nice attempt and he didn't try at all.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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| Ace | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-06, 9:26 PM | Message # 11 |
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| Quote (SimTheDog) Being polite and lying at the same time isn't always the best thing to do. It wasn't a nice attempt and he didn't try at all
I wasn't trying to lie. I'm just saying that with more work it could end up being a pretty good sprite. Which is pretty much what I said.
Quote (HakuHuchiha) It seems to me like JUS Sasuke or something
Quote (Madara) because it is jus sasuke edit
This. You can still see the little rope thing around his waist. Plus he's the only character with a stance like that.
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| Luciole2831 | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-06, 10:23 PM | Message # 12 |
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| Oh sorry I was using my phone and it did spell check and changed I really because I didn't put a space inbetween. And you should make a custom head because sasuke and starkiller don't look alot the same. Also the colors should be darker. More shading. On the lightsaber make the outline a lighter color so its a glow instead of looking like a stick
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| SimTheDog | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-08, 4:11 PM | Message # 13 |
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| I don't know why this thread should hang around any longer if Revan can't even make an effort to make a decent edit, let alone a custom. I can't think of a reason why he'd even take in our criticism anyway showing how much that he even cares for spriting. I think that he just posted this to hopefully get his assed kissed by fanboys that have never even seen real art in their lives. This thread is getting closed, and I don't want to see anything like this ever again.
http://simthedog.deviantart.com/
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